Here is the new photo story, 
Upon discussion with Zhixiong and Colin, some glaring mistakes were discovered. Continuity from 1 to 2 is missing as the bus is different. Continuity from 1 to 3 is also broken as the lines indicate both 1 and 3 were at the same place and 2 was nearer the bus stop.
Zhixiong also commented that 8 would be a big risk if it was not readable when printed out. He also said that there is a lack of emotion in the story. (3) would be better with a facial expression instead of just a watch.
Motion blur would be added to some of the pictures to see if its a good effect to add.
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